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When writing a poem, you mustn't fret,
Don't think about things that you mustn't forget,
Instead, find a line (one you like very much),
And fill all the gaps in with 'mustn't's and such.

A poem, you see, is a lot like a friend,
The type you can weather, and on whom depend.
Metaphorically speaking it's also a boat;
A tenuous one that needs rhythm to float.

A simile, too, makes a nice little change,
A comparison between the real and the strange,
But one is enough in each poem, mind you,
Since a surplus can tend to nudge meaning askew.

"Is rhyming required?" You might hear some ask,
The answer is "No!" but it easily masks
All the unrounded edges, the burs, and the stain
That was left when the sonnet leaked out of your brain.

Starting is half of the battle you face,
Once you’re done with that step, it’s no longer a race,
But instead an adventure, a journey of sorts,
To the furthest and strangest of lyrical ports.

The most difficult part is the finding of time,
And since one’s inspiration might come without chime,
If you take down some notes when you’re out and about,
You’ll have all that you need when your mind is in drought.

Don’t place too much value on terms long of length;
A good poem can do without them to give strength.
The true heart of a poem is not in its words,
But in how many people enjoy it when heard.

Above all, Remember: When writing things down,
Don’t aim to attain the ‘King of Poets’ crown,
Just write what you know, and believe what you write,
Because poetry’s not about getting it right.
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My first and favourite poem in ages. One hour's work.

Please take some time to really let me know what you honestly think. Especially if you hate it.

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:iconmrsthompson:
hate it. It's crap.
No, i kid. It's amazing I really like this one- it reads really easily, made me smile, and is just well crafted in every respect. I think this may be one of those that will stand out even in a few years time.
I also like to read you writing about things, for some reason, over feelings and such. The rest of your poetry is great, but your exploration of a thing is so much more concise, but that's probably because describing or writing about a thing, even an abstract thing like "poetry" can be easier to define than trying to nut out how you feel about something while trying to make it good at the same time.

<3

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-Mrs Thompson
:iconshadowbrother:
*hugs* You're awexome.

I agree, the broader concept of ';poetry' is far easier to define than human emotion. ^_^;

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Grawpbridge is canon, btw.
:iconbellaezrebetfang:
This is wonderful! I love the metaphors you used in the beginning. The flow is very nice! Wow, just love it! :heart:

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"God, we're off the rails,
now they drag me off in pieces." - elle-sophicles
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:iconshadowbrother:
Thanks! :D

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Grawpbridge is canon, btw.
:icondailenna:
Something I just noticed . . . you put a comma outside of a closing bracket. You're the one who told me that punctuation goes inside the bracket (although, I admit that I ignore that most of the time).

Good, open use of poetical device ("Metaphorically speaking it's also a boat; / A tenuous one that needs rhythm to float.").

There's one part that I'm pretty sure is a spelling mistake, but it could be one of two things. "All the unrounded edges, the burs, and the stain" . . . I'm fairly certain that if you meant the not-quite-bindy-things in the grass, that's spelt 'burrs' (double r), but you might also have meant to write 'blurs'.

I like the capital for "Remember". It gives the feeling of a title having been stated, or some such.

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No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist - Oscar Wilde
:iconshadowbrother:
Hoookay....

Comma outside the brackets: Yes, it's technically a rule, but I too ignore it when I feel it detracts from the true meaning of the section (same with punctuation and speech marks).

Well, the 'bur' situation is indeed interesting, apparently the word I was intending was spelt 'burr', but the word you were thinking of is actually spelt 'bur'. How about that?

That capital wasn't quite intentional, but yeah, it works okay. :P

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Grawpbridge is canon, btw.
:icondailenna:
"Well, the 'bur' situation is indeed interesting, apparently the word I was intending was spelt 'burr', but the word you were thinking of is actually spelt 'bur'. How about that?" -brain falls out- What's the sort of burr that you meant? ('Tis a lolable situation.)

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No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist - Oscar Wilde
:iconshadowbrother:
I meant the little sharp bits that are left over when you cut/drill holes in metal.

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Grawpbridge is canon, btw.
:icondailenna:
. . . No wonder I've never heard of them before this :P

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No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist - Oscar Wilde

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